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> "When you click the X button the X dialog is
> displayed" (this is what I
> normally write)
Click the X button. The X dialog is displayed.
> "When you click the X button the X dialog will be
> displayed" (this is what
> my boss wants me to write)
To me, "When" denotes something done in the future, so
this is correct.
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John Posada, Merck Research Laboratories
Sr Technical Writer, WinHelp and html
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