RE: Sentence Structure

Subject: RE: Sentence Structure
From: "Leslie Johnson (Wasser)" <a-leslij -at- microsoft -dot- com>
To: "TECHWR-L" <techwr-l -at- lists -dot- raycomm -dot- com>
Date: Fri, 10 Nov 2000 13:16:38 -0800

<snip>How do I fix this sentence:</snip>

Here's one possibility:

In Empower runtime, when an item receives focus in the Funding Checklist,
the cursor automatically moves to the underscore character(s) in the item
text.

Thoughts:
1. Do you need the In Empower runtime phrase?
2. Can the 2nd "text" be described differently? Perhaps item description?
3. You could split the discussion - the 1st discussion could talk about how
the cursor automatically moves to underscore character(s) in *any* item
text. The 2nd discussion could discuss the cursor movement for the Funding
Checklist item text specifically.
4. You could show a picture, if that'd help.

HTH!
Leslie Johnson

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