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Subject:Re: Quick! Opinion needed... From:Janice Gelb <janiceg -at- marvin -dot- eng -dot- sun -dot- com> To:"TECHWR-L" <techwr-l -at- lists -dot- raycomm -dot- com> Date:Tue, 22 May 2001 14:01:45 -0700 (PDT)
Doug Grossman wrote:
>
> My *personal* preference is this format:
>
> 1. Open your Web browser and enter http://hellothere. Hit the
> "Enter" key to accept this URL, and the "Welcome to Your Life"
> page displays. You are now connected to the "Your Life" server.
> 2. Click on the "Log into Your Life" link, and the "Enter
> Network Password" dialog box displays.
> 3. Enter your user name and password in the appropriate text boxes
> and hit the "Enter" key to accept. Your personal page, showing your
> various "Life" folders, displays. If you do not have a user name
> and/or password, click on the link to e-mail your administrator in
> order to obtain this information.
>
Just to prove Bill's point earlier, I disagree with this
approach. We try to keep the action and the result on
separate lines, so readers can clearly see what they're
supposed to do versus what the result will be.
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