RE: POLL: A question of rhetoric (not a rhetorical question)

Subject: RE: POLL: A question of rhetoric (not a rhetorical question)
From: "Roy Jacobsen" <rjacobse -at- microsoft -dot- com>
To: "TECHWR-L" <techwr-l -at- lists -dot- raycomm -dot- com>
Date: Mon, 5 Nov 2001 15:39:23 -0600

Other than switching from active to passive voice, I'm not sure that
Pete's re-write changes my original to a "neutral" statement. Can you
clarify that, Pete?

Thanks,
Roy

-----Original Message-----
From: Pete Sanborn [mailto:psanborn2 -at- earthlink -dot- net]
Sent: Monday, November 05, 2001 3:37 PM
To: TECHWR-L
Subject: RE: POLL: A question of rhetoric (not a rhetorical question)


Roy Jacobsen writes:
"You can assign at item to only one group."

Or, "An item may be assigned to only one group" to make it a neutral
statement.

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