Re: STYLE: Is Firmware always Firmware?

["Dana Worley" <dana -at- campbellsci -dot- com>]

From:           	"Jonathan Soukup" <JSoukup -at- at-track -dot- com>

> I'm getting a lot of comments where she made this awkward statement
> about "must contain firmware operating software release 1.01.00". 

Drop the software. How about "must contain operating firmware 
release 1.01.00" or "...operating system firmware version..."

Dana W. 

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