RE: On Avoiding Gender Bias

["Secara, Maggie" <Maggie -dot- Secara -at- indymacbank -dot- com>]

Or: Everyone who wants to use the facility must bring an ID card.
(I'm going to asssume the reader knows to bring his/herr own card, not some
random iID.)

or

If you want to use the facility, please bring your I.D. card.

Second person/present tense/active voice


Maggie Secara


> -----Original Message-----
> From: renee -at- e-sim -dot- co -dot- il [mailto:renee -at- e-sim -dot- co -dot- il]
> Sent: Thursday, December 13, 2001 1:55 AM
> To: TECHWR-L
> Subject: Re: On Avoiding Gender Bias
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> Why not rephrase the sentence:
> 
> People (students) who want to use this facility should bring 
> their ID cards.
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> Regards,
> 
> Renee Rothberg
> e-SIM Ltd.
> 
> > 

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