I like mine better, but I don't know why.

[John Posada <jposada01 -at- yahoo -dot- com>]

I'm going back and forth with an analyst on something. I have the
following paragraph:

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This new process delivers the following benefits to the business:
- Improve adherence to corporate discount policies, increase sales
  efficiencies, improve margins, automate and expedite a 
  standardized Discount Approval process.
- Automate workflow of schedule of authorization table lookup to:
  - Confirm Level of authorization
  - etc.....
-------

She keeps adding an S at the end of many of the words, such as
Improves, increases, improves, expidites, Automates, Confirms, etc..

I think it reads better without the S and I'd like to offer a
gramatical rule to justify my position.

Therefore...am I right, wrong, or neither, and if right or wrong, is
there a rule under which this falls?

Thanks


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John Posada, Senior Technical Writer
mailto:john -at- tdandw -dot- com, 732-259-2874

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