Re: I like mine better

["Stuart Rogers" <srogers -at- phoenix-geophysics -dot- com>]

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This new process delivers the following benefits to the business:
- Improve adherence to corporate discount policies, increase sales
efficiencies, improve margins, automate and expedite a
standardized Discount Approval process.
- Automate workflow of schedule of authorization table lookup to:
- Confirm Level of authorization
- etc.....

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This new truck delivers the following groceries to the household:
- Meat.
- Fresh vegetables.
- Canned goods.
- Other NOUNS and NOUN PHRASES that are DIRECT OBJECTS of "delivers."

My $.02.

Stuart Rogers
Technical Communicator
Phoenix Geophysics Limited

mailto:srogers -at- phoenix-geophysics -dot- com

Developers explain How the Product Works.
Technical Writers explain How to Work the Product.


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