RE: Which do you prefer? Why?

[Mike West <mike -dot- west -at- oz -dot- quest -dot- com>]

> I think most people who responded to Bonnie's request failed 
> to notice that 
> she has actually proposed FIVE versions, each slightly 
> different from the 
> others. So the question, I think, was which of those 5 versions we 
> preferred, not whether we preferred her first variation over 
> the original.

If so, she choose an odd way to ask the question:

	>Which do you prefer. Why?

	>http://www.stpaulparish.org/

	>http://www.editors-writers.info/stpaul.html

Each of the two URLs links to a single page.

Sorry, Bonnie, I haven't time to inspect all five versions,
but if they're anything at all like the one you posted the
URL for, any of them would be an improvement over what
has to be one of the least appealing page designs I've
ever seen.

You done good. The minor differences visible in the
thumbnails are not really critical, in my opinion. You've
made the design serve the meaning, instead of competing
with it.

-- 
Mike W




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