Re: Help - sentence restructure needed
Hi Guys,
How can I restructure this sentence.
"This document is not intended to be read chapter for chapter, but rather as you need information on or explanation of features. "
At the moment I am to close to it and need some external prompts.
How about:
This is a reference manual--meant to supply you with the information and answers you need, when you need them, as you work with the product.
I don't *think* you need to specifically tell people not to read it cover-to-cover but, then, I don't know your purpose exactly.
Hope that helps,
J
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