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Subject:Re: Title Help. From:DGoldstein -at- DeusTech -dot- com To:"TECHWR-L" <techwr-l -at- lists -dot- raycomm -dot- com> Date:Wed, 21 May 2003 09:01:18 -0600
Hi Conchan,
I'm a native English speaker and a technical writer. Assuming that this is the title of a technical article or proposal, I don't find it too long at all.
Dan Goldstein
> Hello all,
>
> I need the advice on writing a better title. The one I have is
>
> The Effects of Conductivity on High-Resolution Impulse Sonar Sounding.
>
> It is a little long and wordy for my tastes but as usual I have no one to
> ask. (It is a direct translation from Japanese. Any native English speakers
> who can help?)
>
> Thank you for reading this. Have a nice day/night.
>
> Sincerely,
> Conchan
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