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> A
> When you access the transmission program from a connected workstation, you
> can transfer files from the system's hard disk to the workstation or in
> the reverse direction (from workstation to hard disk).
>
> B
> When you access the transmission program from a connected workstation, you
> can transfer files from the system's hard disk to the workstation or in
> the reverse direction.
>
> C
> When you access the transmission program from a connected workstation, you
> can transfer files from the system's hard disk to the workstation or from
> the workstation to the hard disk.
>
I think C is the clearest. There seems no need to use the words "in the
reverse direction" at all.
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