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Subject:To speak or not to speak -- that is the question From:"Bonnie Granat" <bgranat -at- granatedit -dot- com> To:"TECHWR-L" <techwr-l -at- lists -dot- raycomm -dot- com> Date:Sun, 25 Jan 2004 14:09:26 -0500
My client is asking whether I can produce a brochure based on the
proposed new design of his Web site (using the colors and graphics on
the new site). He calls it his "new site," but it is not live yet.
I am going to be editing the text for the Web site as well as a
second, short manual for this client.
I have three problems I need to solve with regard to this request:
PROBLEM 1 - I have viewed the proposed site and I puzzled out what
the object was in the logo for a full minute before I concluded it was
a very poor attempt to render the globe of the earth and the
continents viewed from above Greenland (yet even after concluding that
was what it was supposed to be, it looks geographically wrong to me
because the globe appears to have large islands south of Greenland).
The graphic is also dark and muddy. Who knows? Maybe it's Mars, and
not Earth! This seems like a very delicate matter; he's obviously
hired a Web design company and paid money for this product, but in my
opinion, it is really inferior. I want to say something, but I want to
be sure that I'm diplomatic and respectful of his feelings.
Proposed solution:
A. In e-mail, ask him if the illustration in the logo is supposed to
be Earth, relying on the question itself to convey the information I
want him to receive. That is, if I have to ask what it is, can the
logo be something that other visitors will immediately recognize?
B. Say nothing, but create a brochure using the colors and graphics of
the site. (I have a real problem with this solution, because I think
the logo is not suitable for professional use.)
PROBLEM 2 - I noticed at least one problem with the Web site (aside
from the graphic). The hover color for the links is almost identical
to the background color of the page, and therefore the links almost
disappear when the user moves the mouse pointer over them. Hover
should be used to draw attention to the link, not make it invisible.
Proposed solution:
A. Ask him if the design is complete and if so, if he can request more
changes. Mention to him the problem about the links.
B. B. Say nothing.
PROBLEM 3 - Can I use FrameMaker or Word to create a brochure design?
I'm assuming the answer is yes, but what do printers expect to get
when a brochure is to be printed?
Proposed solution:
A. Ask him for the dimensions of the brochure and what the final
product should look like. Also ask him what kind of file his printer
wants.