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Such a tool must exist because I keep getting stuff like your example. The
only thing wrong with "I am happy with your performance" is that it's not
more specific about the performance. I'd prefer, "I am happy with your
operation that saved my life," or "I am happy with your ideas for saving
your department money." "Bloating" and "enrichment" aren't synonymous.
Bruce
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Bruce Evans M.D.
Family Physician and Technical Writer
"Never Underestimate the power of very stupid people in large numbers."
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Perelmuter
Sent: Sunday, November 14, 2004 11:10 AM
Hello,
Are you familiar with a software tool that can enrich the text and wording
of an existing English document so they will look more text-wise
professional ?
For example to change “I am happy with your performance” may be upgraded
to: “I am completely thrilled with your outstanding achievement,”
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