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Subject:Re: What is wrong with this sentence? From:"Gene Kim-Eng" <techwr -at- genek -dot- com> To:"TECHWR-L" <techwr-l -at- lists -dot- techwr-l -dot- com> Date:Thu, 14 Apr 2005 06:58:42 -0700
This is the sort of sentence that most good copy editors would
mark "awk" (awkward); there's nothing technically wrong with
it, but it just *feels* wrong to most readers.
Gene Kim-Eng
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From: "Kapoor, Shelly" <SKapoor -at- imf -dot- org>
Specifically, what's wrong with the use of "using which". I think its
incorrect, but I am not sure why that is so.
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