Apple permits "then" to be used as a coord. conjunction in instructions?

Subject: Apple permits "then" to be used as a coord. conjunction in instructions?
From: Geoff Hart <ghart -at- videotron -dot- ca>
To: "TECHWR-L" <techwr-l -at- lists -dot- techwr-l -dot- com>
Date: Mon, 11 Jul 2005 21:52:32 -0400


Tom Johnson reports: <<I have never been more baffled, astonished, and completely nonplussed about a point of grammar before.>>

Clearly you haven't been paying attention. <g> At the no-longer-tender age of 43, grammar continues to baffle, amuses, and astound me--which is part of the fun of working as an editor and trying to explain our language to younger editors who haven't yet learned to relax and just accept the <ahem> occasional </ahem> bit of bizarreness.

<<Apparently, for the last 6 months I have been harboring an incorrect sense of condescension toward what I believed to be a complete grammatical error... the use of "then" as a coordinating conjunction... Yet according to the Apple style guide -- which is not an insignificant authority on matters of style -- when writing instructions that require the imperative mood (and instructions almost always require this mood), the use of "then" to separate two independent clauses "is OK." In other words, I can write, "Click the File menu, then select New and Open." Appalling.>>

I've got some bad news for you... <g> First, most authorities (such as my 1973 Random House Unabridged and the 2000 edition of the American Heritage Unabridged) note quite clearly that this use of "then" is actually an adverbial use, with the "and" left implicit as an ellipsis--in short, "then" takes the place of "and then", and your coordinate conjunction ("and") is still there where it should be, just formatted as hidden text. <g> English is somewhat... um... promiscuous about the use of ellipsis, but that's also one of the joys and powers of the language.

Second, beware the difference between prescriptive grammar ("English as she should be spoken according to [fill in name of authority here]") and descriptive grammar ("English as she is actually spoke by the populace"). The use of "then" in place of "and then" has a long and proud history because it obeys what is arguably the only important rule of grammar: the structure of the sentence must be such as to make the meaning of each word and phrase unequivocal.

If you dissect any grammatical rule--and I am distinguishing these rules from the so-called "rules" of style or usage--you'll see that the rule describes some of the deeper workings of how we speakers of a language parse that language's structure. In that sense, grammar is inherently descriptive, because it describes the underlying rules of what makes the language work; it is also inherently prescriptive in that it tells you what works, and what doesn't, thereby providing the tools to consciously think through communication problems until you have learned to subconsciously solve the problem.

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