RE: Apple permits "then" to be used as a coord. conjunction in instructions?

[eric -dot- dunn -at- ca -dot- transport -dot- bombardier -dot- com]

bounce-techwr-l-106467 -at- lists -dot- techwr-l -dot- com wrote on 07/12/2005 09:25:13 AM:
>   Disengage the gear, then start the engine.
>     (Definite: uses strong verbs)

Or get straight to the point:

1 - Disengage gear.
2 - Start engine.

:)

Eric L. Dunn
Senior Technical Writer

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