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I'd write (especially if it's a procedure, not an explanation):
1. Click DooDah. The BlahBlah screen is displayed.
Art
On 9/2/05, shonn_scott -at- yahoo -dot- com <shonn_scott -at- yahoo -dot- com> wrote:
> I writing a user manual. I am trying to maintain active voice, but I'm
> getting a little writer's block. Would someone tell me which is correct?
> 1. This screen is displayed when the blah blah link is clicked.
> 2. To display this screen, click the blah blah link.
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