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"is displayed" is passive voice, but I think there are times when the
passive voice is perfectly OK.
"XXX displays" is not standard English -- "display" is a transitive
verb; it requires an object. "The screen displays XXX" is OK.
We solved this problem by using "appears" -- it's active and
intransitive.
My 2 cents.
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Subject: active vs. passive voice
I've read many threads on this listserv related to the use of "appears"
vs. "displays" or "is displayed". During a meeting yesterday, with my
fellow tech writers, we had a heated discussion about whether we should
use "is displayed" or "displays" when writing a result (For example,
"Select the XYZ button. The EXY dialog box is displayed.") One writer
insisted that the use of "is displayed" should not be used because it
is
in the passive voice. To be honest, my head was spinning so quickly that
I
decided to refrain from offering my opinion. I did tell them I'd
investigate though.
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