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Subject:RE: active vs. passive voice From:"Leonard C. Porrello" <Leonard -dot- Porrello -at- SoleraTec -dot- com> To:<techwr-l -at- lists -dot- techwr-l -dot- com> Date:Thu, 27 Mar 2008 11:45:13 -0700
Does it open from top to bottom, right to left, or left to right?
Leonard C. Porrello
SoleraTec LLC
www.soleratec.com
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From: Elaine [mailto:culross77 -at- msn -dot- com]
Sent: Thursday, March 27, 2008 11:39 AM
To: Leonard C. Porrello; techwr-l -at- lists -dot- techwr-l -dot- com
Subject: RE: active vs. passive voice
> I can also think of two other options:
>
> (B) "1. Click <New Entry>. The New Entry window will appear."
I beg to differ. The Cheshire cat appears. Windows open.
Cheers,
Elaine Logan
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> Subject: RE: active vs. passive voice
> Date: Thu, 27 Mar 2008 11:31:19 -0700
> From: Leonard -dot- Porrello -at- SoleraTec -dot- com
> To: techwr-l -at- lists -dot- techwr-l -dot- com
>
> I think this is where Geoff's construction would be better:
>
> (A) "1. Click <New Entry> to open the New Entry window."
>
> I can also think of two other options:
>
> (B) "1. Click <New Entry>. The New Entry window will appear."
>
> Or
>
> (C) "1. To open the New Entry window, click <New Entry>."
>
> It all depends on how you want to orient the reader. (A) is nice and
> compact. (B) is very simple and provides a nice segue to a screen
shot.
> (C) lets the reader know what he is about to do before he does it. Of
> course, (C) is probably more appropriate when the user is about to
> execute a step that would be difficult to undo.
>
> (Note, <New Entry> would be an image of the button.)
>
> Leonard C. Porrello
> SoleraTec LLC
> www.soleratec.com
>
>
>
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> om] On Behalf Of Bastette
> Sent: Thursday, March 27, 2008 11:17 AM
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> Subject: Re: active vs. passive voice
>
> On Thu, Mar 27, 2008 at 11:24:24AM -0400, Suzette Leeming wrote:
>
> > My opinion...
> >
> > "is displayed" is passive, but as others have stated, often
> acceptable.
> > "displays" is unacceptable because it is a transitive verb.
> > "displays a list of blah blah blah" is acceptable.
> > "appears" is acceptable but not my favourite.
> > "opens" is preferred when referring to windows (as in "the report
> criteria
> > window opens").
>
> What about "This {displays/opens/brings up} the XYZ {window/dialog
> box}",
> where "this" is the action described in the previous (or same)
> instruction.
>
> Eg:
>
> 1. Click on the New Entry button. This opens the New Entry window
> (dialog,
> etc).
>
> 2. ...
>
> Any objections to that?
>
> Joyce
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