RE: active vs. passive voice

Subject: RE: active vs. passive voice
From: Fred Ridder <docudoc -at- hotmail -dot- com>
To: "Leonard C. Porrello" <leonard -dot- porrello -at- soleratec -dot- com>, <techwr-l -at- lists -dot- techwr-l -dot- com>
Date: Thu, 27 Mar 2008 15:38:41 -0400


> From: Leonard -dot- Porrello -at- SoleraTec -dot- com
> (B) "1. Click <New Entry>. The New Entry window will appear."

Why introduce the future tense? I don't see that it adds any
meaning. In fact, it seems to dissociate the result from its
cause because it carries some implication that the appearance
of the window might not be immediate.

And it still doesn't address the objection of the people who
believe that the verb "appear" is somehow supernatural
because it is the opposite of "disappear".
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References:
active vs. passive voice: From: Michelle Vina-Baltsas
Re: active vs. passive voice: From: Mike Starr
Re: active vs. passive voice: From: Suzette Leeming
Re: active vs. passive voice: From: Bastette
RE: active vs. passive voice: From: Leonard C. Porrello

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