Re: Display, Displays, or Appears

Subject: Re: Display, Displays, or Appears
From: "Gene Kim-Eng" <techwr -at- genek -dot- com>
To: <techwr-l -at- lists -dot- techwr-l -dot- com>
Date: Mon, 9 Jun 2008 14:08:15 -0700

I don't see how "The XXX window is displayed" does
anything more in the event the window is not displayed.

If it said, "The XXX window is displayed; if not see
Section Z, Troubleshooting," that would account for
the possibilty of the window not being there, but who
wants to see *that* repeated after every command in
a manual?

Gene Kim-Eng


----- Original Message -----
From: "Downing, David" <DavidDowning -at- Users -dot- com>
> Okay, so you just refer to the window without explicitly saying it
> opened. That makes sense. However, I am still concerned about the
> situation where something goes wrong and the window isn't displayed as
> it should be. You say that's outside the scope of the instructions,
> but
> I'd be more comfortable if it were accounted for somehow.

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