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We have licensed six technologies, all in various stages of
development...
> Chris
On Wed, May 20, 2009 at 8:53 AM, Deborah Hemstreet <
dvora -at- tech-challenged -dot- com> wrote:
> Hi All,
>
> When writing text for a brochure, which do you believe reads more smoothly:
>
> 1. We have licensed out six technologies that are in various stages of
> development...
>
> 2. We have licensed out six technologies in various stages of
> development...
>
> Could you explain WHY you believe 1 or 2 is better than the other? I
> don't want to give my opnion, as I want as objective a response as
> possible.
>
> Thanks!
>
> Deborah
>http://www.tech-challenged.com
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