Need a little help in wording

["William Sherman" <bsherman77 -at- embarqmail -dot- com>]

You know how once you have read something too many times or you have become 
too close to look objectively, well, I am in that position now. This is my 
daughter's script for a video she is producing and we have looked at a few 
words too many times and now are stuck where nothing sounds right. The 
voiceovers changed the words, they have been changed a couple of times by 
reviewers and now they are at what is shown below but they are also being 
questioned as not right. Frankly, they seem wrong, but we have heard too 
many wrong versions now we could use an outside source that can give an 
unbiased opinion.



Thanks and Merry Christmas.



Diversified in this sentence:



          The most diversified adaptation that plants have are their leaves 
which can do amazing things such as capture water, change colors, and act as 
the fingerprint of the plant.





Herbivorous in this sentence:

           Just like plants, animals have specialized adaptations to help 
them survive the ever-changing challenges of nature. Some examples of 
adaptations that animals have are - herbivorous animals like horses or cows 
have flat teeth to help them grind up grasses;





Diversified in this sentence:

           Lungs help animals to breath on land while other animals use 
gills to breath under water.

           Finally, the most diversified physical characteristics of many 
animals are their feathers,

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