Re: IS or ARE

[Editor in Chief <editorialstandards -at- gmail -dot- com>]

On Wed, Jul 25, 2012 at 10:27 AM, <Joyce -dot- Fetterman -at- l-3com -dot- com> wrote:

> Lauren wrote:
> "I would change to "A current customer receives two months of free
> service."  That rewrite is better for grammar and for marketing because
> it puts the customer first rather than placing the provider of service
> first."
>
>
> "A current customer"? Which one? How will a current customer be chosen
> from among all of the current customers?
>
> <ducking>
> Joyce
>

Fat guy. Red suit. Keeps lists.

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