Re: spec writing - is simple ever wrong ?

[Lois Patterson <loisrpatterson -at- gmail -dot- com>]

In this case, it sounds reasonable to remove that stilted language. But I
have seen cases where inexperienced writers want to remove
industry-specific jargon and replace it with non-specific "simple" language
that does not actually have the same meaning.

Lois Patterson


On Tue, Jul 30, 2013 at 5:18 PM, Tony Chung <tonyc -at- tonychung -dot- ca> wrote:

> On Tuesday, July 30, 2013, Monique Semp wrote:
>
> > I’m editing a specification, and I was merrily redlining all sorts of
> > convoluted wording to be simple and straight-forward.
>
>
>  It could have something to do with groups wanting to defer liability onto
> another party. So when something bad happens each can blame the other for
> not properly interpreting, or writing, the spec.
>
> And most specs are temporary documents that are used to convince management
> to build whatever is specified. Then all the work goes into the detailed
> design documents and nobody refers to the spec again.
>
> -Tony
>
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