E-Primer

Subject: E-Primer
From: Marjorie Schejter <mschejte -at- MELMAC -dot- COAT -dot- COM>
Date: Mon, 9 May 1994 16:19:34 EDT

Barbara Philbrick wrote:

>How do you say "The program manager window is now displayed" without going
>into gory detail like "Windows now displays the program manager." This isn't
>so bad once, but I'm doing a step-wise manual for a Windows application, and
>if every other sentence starts like this, I think it would get tedious to
>read. Plus, I think people just don't care what's causing something to
>happen.

>Any suggestions?

How about "The program manager window displays."?

Marjorie

marjorie -dot- schejter -at- coat -dot- com


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