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Subject:A real-life example of passive voice From:Arthur Comings <atc -at- CORTE-MADERA -dot- GEOQUEST -dot- SLB -dot- COM> Date:Wed, 25 May 1994 14:55:12 PDT
I know we've beaten this subject to death, but I thought I'd share a
great example of ingrown passive voice before I edit it out of
existance. What makes it so special for me is the "allow you to," which
(when it seems to be needed) I always replace with "let you."
Anthropomorphism either way, I know, but it's how people talk, and it
seems to work.
Here, though, "allow you to" rubs salt in an already open wound: