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Subject:Re: Need Help with Wording! From:Marc Santacroce <santa -at- TFS -dot- COM> Date:Mon, 3 Apr 1995 15:22:00 PDT
At 2:05 PM 4/3/95 -0700, Susan W. Gallagher wrote:
>Hey gang...
>I've got a problem with an instruction! Select the
> ^^^^^^^^^^
> vault in which the file for which you want to change
> ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
> the number of versions resides.
> ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
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Sue, how about:
>"Select the vault in which the file requiring the version change resides."
my 0.02.
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