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Improving the clarity

Subject: Improving the clarity
From: Richard Mateosian <srm -at- C2 -dot- ORG>
Date: Fri, 11 Aug 1995 08:41:49 -0700

>So you will have to try harder to match the clarity of "Each user can
>open his personal file by choosing the Open command of the File menu."

Choose Open from the File menu to open your personal file.

To open your personal file, Choose Open from the File menu.

Users can open their personal files by choosing Open from the File menu.

...RM

Richard Mateosian http://www.c2.org/~srm/ President, Berkeley STC
Freelance Technical Writer srm -at- c2 -dot- org Review Editor, IEEE Micro

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