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Subject:Re: Challenge to active-verb advocates From:Richard Mateosian <srm -at- C2 -dot- ORG> Date:Thu, 25 Jan 1996 15:30:38 -0800
>The leaves on the sidewalk were kicked and scattered by passing feet.
>What if "leaves" constitute the focus of the sentence? In other words, what
>if we wish to describe leaves? What if leaves cannot take any action on
>their own? Suppose that we want to point out the passive nature of leaves?
Leaves lay on the sidewalk. Passing feet kicked and scattered them.
I think this accomplishes what you're aiming for. Of course, this sort of
"atmosphere" doesn't usually enter into technical writing. ...RM
