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Subject:Use of "your": Clarification From:Kris Olberg <kjolberg -at- IX -dot- NETCOM -dot- COM> Date:Thu, 17 Jul 1997 18:39:25 -0500
Great discussion so far! But, as Bill Burns pointed out, I want to clarify
that my original question centers on the use of the possessive "your," not
on the use of second v. third person. Here's an example of a possessive
"your" in a sentence. Should the sentence read:
"Your computer turns off automatically
when you shut it down using the Win95
shutdown procedure."
or:
"The computer turns off automatically
when you shut it down using the Win95
shutdown procedure."
Bill gave me a clue as to why we adopted this originally: it doesn't
translate well. But it just SEEMS that there may be a more compelling
reason beyond that ...
Anybody got some real data beyond opinions?
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