Re: We recommend...

Subject: Re: We recommend...
From: Dick Gaskill <dickg -at- AG3D -dot- COM>
Date: Tue, 16 Jun 1998 16:56:55 -0700

Scott,
See comments below.
-dg

>Taking a poll here on how do write recommendations for how to
use
something, for example, if your company is named "Gucci..." what
do you
write?

>"Gucci recommends..."
Use this one if you are representing a company. Include the
reason(s) why the company recommends....

>"We recommend..."
Don't use this one unless you are at least two people.

>"It is recommended..."
Passive voice. Ugh. Avoid using this one. How to avoid
responsibility in one easy lesson. Does not say who recommends it.

>"It is best to..."
You could use this one, but it might be vague unless you add the
reason(s) why the company recommends....

>"You had better the hell..."
Uh huh. Sure. Right. How to win friends and influence
customers. Don't forget to add "OR ELSE !" at the end. :-)

>Thanks,
- Scott Miller




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