Re: Numbers

Subject: Re: Numbers
From: "Jonathan B. Horen" <horen -at- PHOTONET -dot- COM>
Date: Tue, 22 Dec 1998 09:00:35 +0200

John Posada wrote:

> I'd write:
>
>When you press the OK button, page 2 will be displayed, as shown in Figure
>23-45 on page 23-400.

Use ACTIVE voice, John. "...button, page 2 appears..."
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