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Subject:Question of clarity From:Melissa Morgan <mmorgan -at- INTREPID -dot- CDG-HARGRAY -dot- COM> Date:Mon, 21 Jun 1999 10:52:07 -0500
I am trying to figure out what's the best
way to present a complex step (not that
it's difficult, but I want the instruction to
read clearly). Some might argue that this
should be broken into two steps, but
I need to try and keep it in one step.
Here's the sentence:
From the Plant Menu, select (13) for Work
with Whatever, and press Enter.
A co-worker suggested that I remove the
second comma. I explained that I put it
there to cue the user...to clearly separate
the sub-actions that make up the step.
Does anyone have some ideas on the
readability one way or the other? TIA
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Melissa Morgan
mmorgan -at- intrepid -dot- cdg-hargray -dot- com
