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Subject:Re: "Ability" or "allows" From:"Mark L. Levinson" <mark -at- MEMCO -dot- CO -dot- IL> Date:Wed, 23 Jun 1999 15:43:09 +0200
Tim writes:
But why not "Use this selection to..." or "click here to..."
** I agree with those who say "allows" is too weak. The selection
allows you to, but so do I and so does the neighbor's cat. We
all allow you. None of us has any objection.
But there's a bit of a trap in the "use this to" and "click this
to": the distinction between the compulsory and the optional may
be lost.
Suppose, for example, the reader is following a set of instructions
and step 5 says "Select A to do the A thing. Select B to do the
B thing." The reader may not know whether there's the option of
doing neither, whether there's the option of doing both, or what.
Of course, context is all. I may be a little oversensitive because
one of our manuals once came back from a contractor with every
instance of "You can" and "If you want" deleted...
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