Re: Window displays?

Subject: Re: Window displays?
From: Brad <kiwi -at- BEST -dot- COM>
Date: Wed, 14 Jul 1999 23:08:36 -0700

Since we have the common GUI analogy of windows that close, I would argue
that the converse is true and appropriate: windows open. The use of windows
closing and opening is stylistically consistent and concise.

Example: "The Configuration window opens. The Configuration window closes."

If I'm describing the contents of a window, then I use the verb "display"
since there are direct objects. (Per the *style* I *chose* to use, "to
display" is a transitive verb.)

The Configuration window displays the default values.

Surely, everyone can easily take exception to everything anyone says about
the topic at hand. We're dealing with language and interpretation. I'm sure
that we all can look far and wide enough to justify one style usage over
another. I'm just sharing the logic and style that I use that helps me write
more consistently and concisely.







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Subject: Window displays?


Nancy Smith <<...cringes when I read "The ABC Window
displays."... On the other hand, I don't want to be one of those
dyed-in-the-wool purists who cannot change with the times --
when that is appropriate.>>

There's nothing wrong with the verb "displays" used in this
manner. It's both grammatically correct and has been for
some years (have a look at a good dictionary) and more
importantly (_pace_ our recent discussions), it follows current
usage, which makes it familiar to our audiences. Time to
change your wool dye! <g>

--Geoff Hart @8^{)} Pointe-Claire, Quebec
geoff-h -at- mtl -dot- feric -dot- ca

"Though the editor is the author's ally, she should never forget that
she is also the reader's first line of defense."--Shoshanna Green


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