Re: Simple Verbiage Question
Title: RE: Simple Verbiage Questionif part of your standard audience is warehouse workers, what about something a bit more direct, something like this, perhaps....
<screen cap>
<b>Use this screen to:</b>
<li>Choose a row, level, and pallet for the item you're loading.
<li>Change the row, level, and pallet for an item.
<li>Launch soviet warheads.
heck, I wonder if I can use this format in some of my doc. Thanks Cirrus!
Dan Roberts
droberts -at- isogon -dot- com
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Cirrus Matusek [mailto:CMatusek -at- LTDCOMMODITIES -dot- COM]
>
> I keep waffling over this one: I have a screen capture and under each
> screen capture I have a brief description (two to three
> sentences) of the
> screen's functionality (what it's used for). My audience consists of
> warehouse worker types as well as corporate office types.
> For the header
> for the brief description be "Screen Functionality" or
> "Purpose of Screen"
> or something else? Before you say I shouldn't have a header
> at all, I've
> already decided that I will. Thanks!! I welcome any and all ideas.
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