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Re: can anyone suggest a synonym or a better way of saying broken dow n
Subject:Re: can anyone suggest a synonym or a better way of saying broken dow n From:"Walter Bross" <Indulis -at- msn -dot- com> To:"TECHWR-L" <techwr-l -at- lists -dot- raycomm -dot- com> Date:Thu, 14 Dec 2000 14:46:54 -0500
> In a lot of the documentation that was written previously, and which I'm now
> editing, is the phrase "broken down" used a lot. For example,
>
> "This file contains all holdings at that trust broken down by fund and
> account."
or, rewrite the sentence to say "in these categories:..."
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