RE: Help: Beauty is what Beauty does

[Badrinarayanan_Srinivasan <Badrinarayanan_Srinivasan -at- satyam -dot- com>]

Try 

"an important highlight"

or 

"the main feature"


Regards,
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Badri


-----Original Message-----
From: Kirby_Sarah [mailto:Kirby_Sarah -at- bls -dot- gov]
Sent: Friday, September 14, 2001 3:20 AM
To: TECHWR-L
Subject: Help: Beauty is what Beauty does


Could someone help me to rephrase the following sentence to something a
little more businesslike: 

"The beauty of option 1 is XYZ."  

I want to take beauty out of the picture and say something more like, the
main advantage or something.

-Sarah Kirby
BLS LAN Support
Documentational Specialist


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