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RE: Title Help.

Subject: RE: Title Help.
From: "Gilger.John" <JGilger -at- acresgaming -dot- com>
To: "TECHWR-L" <techwr-l -at- lists -dot- raycomm -dot- com>
Date: Wed, 21 May 2003 10:28:06 -0700


I need the advice on writing a better title. The one I have is

The Effects of Conductivity on High-Resolution Impulse Sonar Sounding.


Sincerely,
Conchan

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Use "Conductivity Effects on High Resolution Sonar".

"Impulse" and "Sounding" are redundant words since Sonar is using sound impulses to take soundings (among other things).

John

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