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There was a successful play titled, "The Effects of Gamma Rays on
Man-In-The-Moon Marigolds." I'm not sure if this helps or not<G>.
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On 5/21/03 6:53 PM, "Con & Yu" <dorun -at- m3 -dot- dion -dot- ne -dot- jp> wrote:
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> Hello all,
>
> I need the advice on writing a better title. The one I have is
>
> The Effects of Conductivity on High-Resolution Impulse Sonar Sounding.
>
> It is a little long and wordy for my tastes but as usual I have no one to
> ask. (It is a direct translation from Japanese. Any native English speakers
> who can help?)
>
> Thank you for reading this. Have a nice day/night.
>
> Sincerely,
> Conchan
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