RE: Grammer question

["Leonard C. Porrello" <Leonard -dot- Porrello -at- SoleraTec -dot- com>]

I like this. Thanks. I still wonder why/how the syntactical differences
between A and B effect the semantics. 

 

Leonard

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From: arroxaneullman -at- aol -dot- com [mailto:arroxaneullman -at- aol -dot- com] 
Sent: Thursday, August 28, 2008 11:30 AM
To: Leonard C. Porrello
Subject: Re: Grammer question

 

May I suggest:

You can ingest from any computer that is on your network and meets
requirements.

Good luck!

Arroxane

 

 

-----Original Message-----
From: Leonard C. Porrello <Leonard -dot- Porrello -at- SoleraTec -dot- com>
To: techwr-l -at- lists -dot- techwr-l -dot- com
Sent: Thu, 28 Aug 2008 1:27 pm
Subject: Grammer question

I can't decide which of the following two expression is preferable:









 









A. You can run ingest jobs from any computer that meets requirements in




your network.









 









Vs.









 









B. You can run ingest jobs from any computer in your network that meets




requirements.









 









The requirements mentioned pertain to the computer, not the network.









 









I am leaning toward B, but I am not sure why. Thoughts?









 









Thanks in advance!









Leonard









 









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