Punctuation question

[<tammyvb -at- spectrumwritingllc -dot- com>]

Consider the following three sentences:

 

1.	The information is displayed across five tabs, which, from left to
right, are the following: Overview, Category, Locus, Sequence, and Details.
2.	The information is displayed across five tabs, which from left to
right, are the following: Overview, Category, Locus, Sequence, and Details.
3.	The information is displayed across five tabs, which from left to
right are the following: Overview, Category, Locus, Sequence, and Details.

 

Three different editors. Three different copy edits. I have my 'druthers,
but I thought I would reach out to all the writers on this list and get a
majority opinion. And yes, I am saying opinion, because I know that there is
an absolute right and wrong, but I need to be neutral and non-judgmental
when supplying my feedback and making the correction. Three egos are
involved. . . . 

 

TVB

 

Tammy Van Boening

Tammy dot vanboening at spectrumwritingllc dot com

www.spectrumwritingllc.com <http://www.spectrumwritingllc.com> 

 

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