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Subject:Re: Re[4]: Responsible use of Obviously From:Karen Kay <karenk -at- NETCOM -dot- COM> Date:Wed, 13 Oct 1993 12:21:01 PDT
Jane Torpie said:
> 1. Select File > Open .... First part of a step
> has the action a user
> should take
> The Open File dialog box appears, as Effect of that action
> illustrated in Figure 1. or feedback to user
> appears in the second
> part of a step
This makes more sense to me than just saying that Figure 1 comes
at the end. The appearance of the dialogue box is the topic, and
being illustrated in Figure 1 is the comment, which makes it easy
to understand. Thanks for the example.
