Re: argument!!

Subject: Re: argument!!
From: "Massi, Jerri" <JMassi -at- ADMIN -dot- CLEMSONSC -dot- NCR -dot- COM>
Date: Wed, 7 Dec 1994 14:03:00 PST

Sorry--subject of the sentence is "millions"
"it" is the object of a preposition.
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From: TECHWR-L
To: Multiple recipients of list TECHWR-L
Subject: argument!!
Date: Wednesday, December 07, 1994 9:50AM

A friend and I argue over a sentence found in a book.

The sentence -> Millions of people from every continent are connected to
it.

the word "it" is the subject and an echo word. I say the sentence should
be rewritten to say "It has millions of people from every continent
connected."
But this way sounds like something is missing.

any suggestions?


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