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>We had a sentence that told the user:
>"The toolbar buttons trigger commands that are also found
>on menus."
People have suggested some succinct rewrites, but I'd like to
point out that (IMHO) whether or not "trigger" is too technical, we
see it at least as often as a noun as a verb, so the string "toolbar
buttons trigger" will make a lot of people pause to decode the apparent
three nouns in a row correctly. And, of course, the word is followed by
another noun, making a pretty dense mass.
I guess this is because when I'm reading fast (which is most of the
time) I just catch on to a noun toward the beginning of the sentence,
and then scan for the operational verb; under such conditions, this
construction would throw me off.
Arthur Comings
GeoQuest
Corte Madera, California
atc -at- corte-madera -dot- geoquest -dot- slb -dot- com
