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Subject:There's gotta be a better name for this field From:Linda Castellani <linda -at- GRIC -dot- COM> Date:Mon, 13 Jul 1998 15:14:45 -0700
Let me add that the longer description field *does not* print anywhere and
is only for the user's edification.
>Date: Mon, 13 Jul 1998 14:53:50 -0700
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>From: Linda Castellani <linda -at- GRIC -dot- COM>
>Subject: There's gotta be a better name for this field
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>Ack! I'm hoping you can help me.
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>I'm documenting a function that defines charges and credits. There are
>four fields on this screen, three of which are astoundingly vague. I made
>acceptible suggestions for two of them, but am at a stalemate with the
>developers on the third. The field is currently called "Label." It is
>followed by a field called "Description."
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>There seems to be a consensus that the field contains whatever prints on
>the invoice next to the charge or credit. But they say it can't be called
>"Invoice Text" or the like because the charge or credit might also appear
>somewhere else, not just on the invoice. There is also a consensus that
>what the field is for is to enter a short (50 character) version of what
>appears in the longer (255 character) description field. (Don't ask me
>why; seems kinda silly to me.) So, I've been given two choices: I can
>either agree to leave it at "Label" or it can be changed to "Short
>Description." I am not happy with either of these, but those are my only
>choices, unless I come up with something better. This is the time when I
>wish I had fellow tech writers to brainstorm with, but since I don't, I'm
>hoping that you foks can help. What's a better name for this field?
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>Linda Castellani
>Technical Writer
>GRIC Communications, Inc.
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>linda -at- gric -dot- com
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Linda Castellani
Technical Writer
GRIC Communications, Inc.
1421 McCarthy Blvd.
Milpitas, CA 95035