"Wish" in tech docs

Subject: "Wish" in tech docs
From: Gina Hertel <Ghertel -at- ALPHA88 -dot- COM>
Date: Tue, 21 Jul 1998 14:40:45 -0400

In my response to my previous example, some list members said they would not
use the word "wish" in technical documentation. How would you rephrase
this, for example?

Step 1: From the Destination List, click on the Destination you "wish" to
edit.

Gina Hertel
Manager, Technical Communications
Alpha Technologies, Inc.
ghertel -at- alpha88 -dot- com
(732) 980-1800 Ext.749




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