Re: "Wish" in tech docs

Subject: Re: "Wish" in tech docs
From: "Feeman, KevinX" <kevinx -dot- feeman -at- INTEL -dot- COM>
Date: Tue, 21 Jul 1998 11:52:00 -0700

What about this:

Step 1: From the Destination List, click on the Destination that you
"want" to edit.

Kevin Feeman
kevinx -dot- feeman -at- intel -dot- com


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Subject: "Wish" in tech docs
Author: "Gina Hertel" [SMTP:Ghertel -at- ALPHA88 -dot- COM] at MSXGATE
Date: 7/21/98 11:40 AM


In my response to my previous example, some list members said they would not

use the word "wish" in technical documentation. How would you rephrase
this, for example?

Step 1: From the Destination List, click on the Destination you "wish" to
edit.

Gina Hertel
Manager, Technical Communications
Alpha Technologies, Inc.
ghertel -at- alpha88 -dot- com
(732) 980-1800 Ext.749





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